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The school updated its security protocols that day. Again.

Lira raised an eyebrow. “Nice. Now they’ll think we’re collaborating.” -ENG- Vertin in detention -RJ01250668-

Conflict: The principal is strict, maybe an AI or a strict human. Vertin's detention could lead to a bigger discovery. Perhaps while in detention, Vertin finds out something the school is hiding. Maybe the school is covering up experiments or surveillance. The school updated its security protocols that day

Vertin smirked. “I corrected it.”

Start writing, focus on building the world, the tension between Vertin and authority, and the unfolding mystery. Use dialogue to develop characters. Show Vertin's skills through actions. Maybe include a time limit to add urgency. focus on building the world